
Posture Me Blue
Posture me blue
Sitting arms at side
Bored to tears, statuesque
Striking movement in stride
Bending at the waist
Derriere and floor become one
Arm cradling head
Exhale stress and dread
Chin pressed to chest
Relaxed, I posture, rest
My birthday suit at its best
Relaxed, I imbue serene
Posture me blue
Posture Me Blue is written in response to the word prompt.
Image credit: Henri Matisse
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23 replies on “Posture Me Blue”
hi, O’Nika π
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sadje, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/09/03/w3-prompt-175-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoyβ£οΈ
Much love,
David
Hi David, thank you so much! π
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A sculpture in words, so unique π I like the line βMy birthday suit at its best” signifying vulnerability yet confidence.
Nicely written, the art is perfect π
I appreciate your kind words! Thank you. I was trying to correlate calmness with the color blue. At the same time highlighting the “birthday suit” being both vulnerable and confident. ππ₯°
Nice poem π ONika you got people putting arrows through hearts lol lol this was good poem Blud is my favorite color so this resignate with me
Thank you, Louis! Blue is a popular color. ππ
hi, O’Nika π
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Carol Anne, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/08/27/w3-prompt-174-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoyβ£οΈ
Much love,
David
Thank you, David! I will check it out. π
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Great poem, O’Nika! I felt like I was doing some yoga moves in there.
Yvette M Calleiro π
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Thank you, Yvette! I was trying to make the connection of calm and the color blue. Yoga definitely adds to that as well. Glad you enjoyed! ππ
I love this take, from the viewpoint of the sitter and this line is a great one ‘Derriere and floor become one’ π
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate you taking time to leave a comment. ππ§‘
This reminded me of yoga poses… where we control breathing as a way to relax the mind and the body. Bravo!!
Thank you so much! ππI’m glad you enjoyed it! Yoga does bring to mind relaxation with the gentle stretching and breathing techniques.
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Beautiful piece OβNika.
Sadje, thank you very much! ππ
Youβre most welcome
I really like the calm flow of this, OβNika. The way βexhale stress and dread / chin pressed to chestβ moves into rest feels soothing to me.
Much love,
David
Thank you, David! I appreciate it. I was trying to correlate the color blue with calming. ππ
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