No Need for Name Calling
An Etheree
Knock
Who's there?
Tap, tap, tap
Tap tap tap who?
Knock, knock, tap, tap, bam
Who's that rapping my door?
Knock, knock, tap, tap, bam, bam, ding
Pressing the doorbell again, dong
Trodding to the door, you yell, coming!
Just open the door already, Ding Dong!
Robbie invites us to write a poem using onomatopoeia for this week’s Tanka Tuesday challenge. I tried to add some humor to this one about someone knocking at the door. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy it!😊 And thank you, Robbie, for your inspiration. 🙏🏽💕
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20 replies on “No Need for Name Calling”
This is perfect 💜💜💜
Thank you so much, Willow! 💕
Wow there was a familiar episode that happened last week like this on a door cam lol 😆
Ha, ha. 😀yes, isn’t that funny! 🙏🏽💕
I love the sprinkling of humor in your Etheree, O’Nika. The last line made me laugh! 💟
Colleen, thank you so much! I’m glad you had a laugh! 🙏🏽💕
I love this, it certainly carries the whole scene so well, and the last line I love the ambiguity which is told only by the title – clever.
Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏💛 I see that you caught my “odd” sense of humor😁
In my house the dog would be barking mad 😂😂💞
😃 lol, I understand. And sometimes people will keep ringing the bell even though they hear the dog barking, go figure💕
😂
So well written O’Nika
Thank you, Sadje🙏🏽💕
You’re welcome my friend
Such commotion! I hope it ends up to be a good visit.
Yes, with that dreadful knocking, you can never tell what will happen next😀 Thank you for stopping by and reading 💕🙏🏽
Great poem, O’Nika! Those constant knockers annoy me. Lol!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Thank you, Yvette! 🙏🏽💕I agree with you about the ones who keep on knocking, so impatient😀
This is great. Thank you for participating.
Robbie, thank you so much! 🙏🏽💕And thank you for your inspiration for the prompt.